Thursday, 27 October 2016

Wednesday, 25 May 2016

The Beach Was Usual Enough

Foxton Beach Poem

The beach was usual enough; it had
Desert like dunes, shells, driftwood, a sky                                        
Over it, and even a massive hill of sand to slide down
I like. My brother, my sister and I
Did what siblings do – dozed in the hot
Sand,  pretended to have world war 3, jumped over
The big waves, climbed on top of the
Massive drift wood piles,
Played cricket in the hard sand, wrestled or swam
Doing nothing important.


NYLD Palindrome's
Speech to speaking
Fun and laughter
Laughter and fun
Speaking to speech

Pens clicking
Chatter and laughter
Laughter and chatter
Clicking pens
Purple pink

Tuesday, 5 April 2016

Wed 30th March 2016 Opener Sentences
As we walked down the five hour walk, we had lots of stops and drinks.
After dark, we walked over to the cave to see the amazing glow worms.
While we were caving, we saw lots of wetas and some crayfish.
When we rock climbed, our hands got sweaty and tired.
Unless we didn't put long clothes, on we got eaten by mosquito's.
Serial sentences:
The glow worms were shiny, small, sticky and lots of fun.
Rock climbing was sweaty, hard and scary.
The caves were wet, freaky and so much fun.
In the the cabins Violet was talking, laughing and
giggling hard until the teacher told to tell her to go to bed.
The cabins were littered with wet shorts, abandoned blankets and lonely sleeping bag cases.   
Interrupter sentences:
The rapids were strong, white and fast, at river testing.
The, littered and messy, cabins were full of talking children.
Our, wet and muddy, clothes took ages to dry.

The wetas were,creepily, quite cool.